Tyrone Brightwell
Saturday, December 31, 2011
"Coaxing Spring" Are you awaiting Spring's return? comments if you please?
A very nice flow and I like the use of 'Come Spring'. My only critique would be eliminating some words in the last stanzas. Overall, very nice.
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